These are phrases to avoid using in ANY of your communication.
(These have been taken directly from emails that players have asked me to review in the past)
Am I recruitable?
I hope I can play for you.
Am I good enough?
I think I can be of value to you.
It’s my dream to play at (school).
Please email me back. I want to play at (school) more than anything!
I throw (mph) off the mound.
Reminders
Email from a position of strength
If you were — hands down — the best player in the country, would you say things like this?
Even if you’re not the best player, you should still communicate as though you are. Communicate from a position of confidence and strength, not timidity.
Show — don’t tell.
Leave statistics out of it unless a coach specifically asks for them
If a coach wants to see your statistics, he’ll find them on his own.
This is a rare example where it’s okay to let a coach find information on his own.
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