We want to create a tweaked version of the 1st landing page you built for us, focusing less on Terminal and more on the Mobile App use case.
Reason for this is primarily that the Mobile App product is the majority of our current product usage, and we anticipate that to stay the same with our new product.
Product difference
Here’s a good visual overview of our product line:
We have Terminal as a separate all-in-1 product, as well as Bring Your Own Device (BYOD) in which a merchant can take credit cards from a computer web browser, or via our iOS/Android App available for iPhone, iPad, and Android phones and tablets.
We’d like to create a version of the LP dedicated to the BYOD use case.
What should change
Photography
All photography should use iPhone / Android phones and mobile tablets. This is the primary thing to change here; your Designer did a great job merchandising this page for Terminals. We’d like to do the same for Mobile.
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We think we should add a section for our mobile card reader (more details below).
this is a Bluetooth-enabled device that turns you mobile device into a card reader with swipe, dip, and tap capabilities
The card reader does not work on a computer.
maybe call out that you can manage your payments, see real-time transaction history, at a computer? might be good to emphasize since we’re just talking mobile payment acceptance, but stuff that’s hard to do from your phone is totally possible on a computer
any other tweaks you recommend, to bring this message home!
Assets
For your reference, the slightly tweaked version of the 1st LP you created for us is accessible here: