Stages, you could use athletes on the track lines to better represent them, e.g. have runners running away from you on their stage lanes
1st stage: running quick with good form, looking straight ahead
2nd stage: running slower, but hampered form, fully looking to the left towards 1st stage
3rd stage: walking, head turning to the left and turning back to forwards
add the runner from above to make visually interesting. Make sure 2nd stage is highlighter in vo-2-
Unable to see a viable future in the sport - turn even darker, track disappears
Updates to storyboard
Could reduce the intro by removing social construction points, doesn’t feel as important
Can add “Injury can have a devastating psychological impact” for context
Could have the “ultimately their trajectory” on 4th slide
On the end of the intro, to express the cyclical plot of highs and lows the athletes the athletes could go up and down. Possibly somehow go downwards to represent downwards trajectory
Cut the hands losing control at end of running man
Stages, instead of highlight lines through out a stage, just highlight them when the narrator speaks
Medal scene: Could knock back things about progress markers
Medal scene: Could drop first 2 slides narrator from dumbell section
For a body they no longer recognising - the track could disintegrate / stop obeying laws of physics.
Don’t highlight the the track in rain scene
Add wind and make athlete objects swirl
Wasn’t aware you could look around, should we suggest this in tutorial or onboarding?
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