It looks like the typeform is set to automatically advance when you scroll all the way to the bottom on mobile. So when you get some of the text hidden by the button (see attached) when I try to scroll to see what it says - it automatically advances me to the next screen. Maybe pad the bottom with some line breaks?

Would be great if this said “we’ve got your back” here instead of “covered”. Then it feels like a call back in the last screen too. Call back to have back. Back to back.

Second Round

Change platform to app

pick name for the typeform - suggested “tour” or “guide” vs presentation

Some graphics low res

mic check states in wrong order (IT’s ON PURPOSE)

It still feels very long and hard to digest it all. It says we don’t need to memorize anything at the beginning but the format of a click-thru form makes it hard to really see the big picture. I’m not saying you should change it but I wonder if another format could get this across. One onboarding video? An infographic PDF? It’s just hard to grok it all in this format. And if we don’t need to grok it all, then what is the point of it? Maybe a simpler sneak peek would do the trick.

The entry forms that are very low on the page are impossible to click on in vertical screen; check UX on mobile

First Round

Photo with Jay Ellis – retire

check design on mobile

Re-work equation is a bit too long

New Pic of Anthony

Buttons – Make POV the same throughout

May have too much information/streamline some of the product speak

Increment of time – too much time; find the smallest amount of time they will need to invest

manually put time it takes to complete

Add progress bar

Time qualifications for videos

Recall the info around the fork

Let them know they don’t have to retain/no test

Confidentiality – take out the “don’t worry” part

We don’t say the name of the Surgeon General… or I missed it. And on that page, I’d love to see more about that work/study; less about HOW you’ll be connecting but focus more on WHY.

??? - List instead of emojis for play at work (??)

Would love to see our name freestyle+ instead of using WE or US in the text.

Is mixing up the mic check order intentional? Threw me a bit but I like it.

Suggest we drop the term “Synergy” 90’s jargon term. Perhaps “Squad” etc instead

??? - This needs a different background color so there’s more contrast and make it more readable. Overall, this graphic should be bigger

Icon text too small

Graphics are low res – make more crisp

Contrast of colors used – tough on eyes (esp on benefits page)

The text is really small on the images for benefits & take turns slides.

Swap out dog picture

Let them know why they are doing it

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