Writing Part 2

Test 5

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Sample

A lot of people enjoy shopping in their free time, but I’d rather do almost anything other than that! As you can tell, I’m not a huge fan of shopping, but that doesn’t mean I never go shopping.

In fact, I go grocery shopping with my grandma nearly every week. It’s a great way for us to spend some time together and I can help carry any of her heavy bags. My parents usually buy most things that we need in our local market.

My dad buys things online because there is more choice, but mainly for his hobby. He likes ordering fi shing equipment on the internet.

Comment A good range of vocabulary has been used throughout the text to clearly communicate the writer’s views and opinions about the topic of shopping the word length (108 words) is acceptable.

Test 6

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Sample

Music is extremely important to me and my life would be so dull without it. Listening to music is what I enjoy most! I don’t have one favourite type of music because I keep discovering new artists and musical styles.

I’ve got thousands of songs on my iPod, so I enjoy anything from rock music that my parents listened to when they were teenagers to the latest pop bands.

If I could aff ord to go to live concerts, I would go at every opportunity to hear new musicians perform. Instead, I watch music programmes on TV and I regularly search for new music on the internet.

Comment The article is well-structured and the writer’s opinion and likes dislikes are explicit. ? ere is a variety of tenses and structures used correctly, including the second conditional. New vocabulary is introduced to avoid repetition and the answer is an appropriate length (107 words).

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