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Feedback for Jane

Thank you for attending Mafia with Gary! We hope you’ve enjoyed it and can’t wait to see you again.

Do not think that’s all! We have prepared feedback on the speaking skills you demonstrated during the game.

We couldn’t believe you were a Mafia member until the end of the game! Are you a professional Mafia player?

We’ve noticed that you were actively engaged in the game and showed a beautifully fluent style of speaking.

There is always room for improvement. We would like to give you a few recommendations:

Try not to say
‘olderly lady’.
You can say
‘old lady’
or
‘elderly lady’
(
‘elderly’
is more polite than
‘old’
).
If you want to talk about something that was in progress in the past, use Past Continuous (was/were +Ving) → One of my cats
was
worry
worrying
about something.
When you make a sentence with
who
, for example, “I don’t kill people who
like
cats
”,
and
who
refers to the plural noun (
‘people’)
, use the verb without -s (like
s
) after
who
.

We hope that our advice is useful for you!

25.08.2021

Thank you for attending Mafia with Gary! We hope you’ve enjoyed it and can’t wait to see you again.

Do not think that’s all! We have prepared feedback on the speaking skills you demonstrated during the game.

Congratulations on your first experience of a Mafia role! We hope it was fun:)

While speaking:

you almost always used the correct grammar structures
you showed a wide enough vocabulary
you succeed in paraphrasing to make the meaning of your speech clear for the other participants

We’ve prepared a few recommendations that can help to master your English:

Use no prepositions after
‘meet’
when you talk about spending time with your friends — We are going to meet
with
my friends.
Meet with
’ means seeing someone officially to discuss something.
Use markers (
usually, always, never etc.
) after the verb
to be — My concerts
usually
are usually very popular.
Use
there is/are
when you talk about the presence of something or somebody —
There were
It was
a lot of people there.
P.S. it’s OK to have two words
‘there’
in this sentence.
Try not to use two verbs ‘
to be
’ in Past Continuous —
Are you were
Were you
smelling flowers at night?

We hope that our advice is useful for you!

07.09.2021

Thank you for attending Mafia with Gary! We hope you’ve enjoyed it and can’t wait to see you again.

Do not think that’s all! We have prepared feedback on the speaking skills you demonstrated during the game.

While speaking:

you almost always used the correct grammar structures
you showed your extensive vocabulary

Here are a few recommendations from us:

This night I
am not
wasn’t sleeping/ didn’t sleep. —
use the Past simple (V2/ed) or Past continuous (was/were + Ving) to talk about the events that happened
this night,
because the night is over
Stay
spend
my days in the city — if you want to say that you use time for a particular purpose, it’s better to use the verb
‘spend’ (spend time, spend holidays)
I was staying
at
in
my bed — if you use the preposition
at
here, you mean that you are near your bed. And if you want to say that you were
in
bed, it’s better to use the preposition in.

We hope that our advice is useful for you!

09.09.2021

Thank you for attending our Personalities Game! We hope you’ve enjoyed it and can’t wait to see you again.

Do not think that’s all! We have prepared feedback on the speaking skills you demonstrated during the game.

Many thanks for your active participation in the game! Your interesting questions helped to find out the personalities.

If you don’t know the gender of a person you are talking about, you can use a gender neutral pronoun
they
— Are they politicians?

And if you want to ask about gender, you can say
Is this person male or female?

Here is an interesting video on this topic

We hope that our feedback is useful for you!

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