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Feedback for Guzel Musina

28.09.2021

Thank you for attending Mafia with Gary! We hope you’ve enjoyed it and can’t wait to see you again.

Do not think that’s all! We have prepared feedback on the speaking skills you demonstrated during the game.

While speaking:

you used various grammatical forms
you always used appropriate vocabulary
you linked ideas together effectively

Just one thing to improve on:

There is a strict word order in English (subject + verb + … ). If your sentence consists of two parts, try to use the standard word order for both of them — I have no idea
who is the mafia
who
the mafia
is
(the mafia — subject; is — verb).
We hope that our feedback is useful for you!

12.10.2021

Thank you for attending Mafia with Gary! We hope you’ve enjoyed it and can’t wait to see you again.

Do not think that’s all! We have prepared feedback on the speaking skills you demonstrated during the game.

While speaking:

you used simple and complex grammar forms
you always used appropriate vocabulary
you linked ideas together effectively

Just one thing to improve on:

You can show the order of two past events by using the Past Perfect (had + V3/ed) for the earlier action. For example, I
had obtained
great results
(earlier action)
. I had an explosion after that.
We hope that our feedback is useful for you!
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