WHY DOESN’T THIS WORK?
• It’s very short. Heds should be snappy but not at the cost of clarity
• Doesn’t say WHO or WHAT the article is about? The first mention of the who the profile is, is in the second line of the dek
• Because hierarchy still exists. In the world at large and in world of SEO. The first ‘keyword’ you mention will be deemed the most important
WHAT WOULD AN EASY FIX?
Adding in name to hed
—→ Michael Clark: The Artist’s Dancer